Elegance Twisted by Sherry Deanne

Modernist prose poetry and a bit of rambling from me.



Thursday, January 7, 2010

Revision 1:

There isn't a craft
secured
bobbing
moored to my pier.

The hungry seagulls
circle
searching
before moving on.

Quiet evenings
are sparse --
the moon
is patient tonight.

______________________

There isn't a boat
secured
moored
cabled to my pier.
The hungry seagulls
circle
inspect --
before moving on.
Quiet evenings
are sparce --
the moon
is patient tonight.

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