Revision 1:
There isn't a craft
secured
bobbing
moored to my pier.
The hungry seagulls
circle
searching
before moving on.
Quiet evenings
are sparse --
the moon
is patient tonight.
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There isn't a boat
secured
moored
cabled to my pier.
The hungry seagulls
circle
inspect --
before moving on.
Quiet evenings
are sparce --
the moon
is patient tonight.
Thursday, January 7, 2010
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